Well done, but lacks depth
It was very well done, the animation was great, the music cues right on, but all that work was put into conveying simple and common themes, something we hear everyday. Overcoming fear of what is different and putting forth a simple act of kindness, etc etc, sob sob. Sorry to be an insensitive jackass, but it's what I do. There's nothing wrong with the little story... I'm just amazed at all the work you put in to making something that I couldn't have cared less about. (Not that either of my movies convey any important messages, but what can I say, I'm a hypocrite.)
It was funny, because it makes fun of DBZ, but...
"This is my opion of every anime"
DBZ is not anime, it is an Americanized piece of crap. There is plenty of good, intelligent anime out there, but it is rare to see any of it on American TV (thats not what Americans want, of course). Don't make uneducated generalizations.
This deserves some credit simply due to the fact that it actually had a PLOT, unlike most NG submissions. however, the plot didn't entirely make sense to me. When the first personality didn't turn out right, why didn't they just delete it? Why is the enemy named "Mortal Enemy"? If Electronica was made to simulate the real world, why are there invincible robot police? Oh well, good job.
I feared the day I'd run into the 'unanswerable questions.' I think I can answer why they didn't just delete Mortal Enemy: Because it is a personality, it has fear for its own life. Deleting it isn't as easy as any other file. When the scientists dragged Mortal Enemy's icon to the trash, he replaced it with some random file and that got erased instead, and he kept doing that until the scientists decided they needed someone inside the system to take down Mortal Enemy. (phew! what a save!)
Cool, but could use a little work
Make a custom cursor, I feel kind of stupid shooting them with an arrow.
Make it "move on" automatically, its annoying having to click the little button everytime.
Other than that, kick ass game.
I noticed this because it had a very high score. It bugs me that this is going to beat out quality animations and games, just because it has a nude picture of Jessica Alba. I'm tired of Newgrounds being a porno site, there are other places to get porn. Now, I'm not trying to act like I know what's best for everyone, I just think that if Newgrounds was cleaned up a bit, we would start seeing more quality work appear.
Did you bother playing around with it? Did you find the rubber duck and find where to put it? This is more than just a nude picture! it's an interactive sudsy adventure!
It would be more fun if it was faster. And maybe you should try to build on pong, make different levels with obsticals or something.
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